black hole sun won t you come

you know , this type of fanfic should be banned... it lower you intelligence, why do i say that ? well lets start with a simple frase " ITS A BLACK HOLE" why is that , because is the fundamental law of gravity , if its not the strongest law its on top 3 , a black hole of size a ping pong ball can destroy a planet, the moment that he awakened his martial soul , everyone in vicinity should be puled on black hole and died , crack fic its something this is not a crack fic its a dumb fic, the one that lower you intelligence , a black hole martial soul its so stupid powerful that i cant think how the fic going to develop , i read half first chapter and couldn't read anymore, when i saw black hole i thought its was gravity martial soul, and going to create something like a black hole , but NOOOOOO ITS A FUKING BLACK HOLE ""

When I read about them using a black hole as a power source. I was like what the **** why? You have the technology to make a fucking black hole you use it as an energy source. And dont let me get started with it connecting earth and moon together I mean why won't it just swallow everything in the solar system? I have no problem with sci-fi novels I read swallowed star and super gene my problem is when they try to be "scientific". When people read this they might think ow a black hole can be used as a power source hmmm. Why not a giant antimatter factory its still possible. But this just makes drop it instantly swallowed star has extraterrestrial super beings. Super gene goes for the multiverse they both tackle the things that we know little about. but we no a lot about black holes and what it does and it is definitely not source of energy its more like it pulls things in orbit. Maybe if they use a white hole it would have been more belevable. Ps. for those who will say that we dont know anything about what happens inside a black maybe thats where the energy is. BOI IF YOU HAVE THE TECHNOLOGY TO POKE AROUND EVEN AT THE SURFACE OF A BLACK HOLE THAT CAN LITERALLY PULL THE FUCKING ATOMS IN A MATERIAL WHY WHOULD YOU FUCKing NEED TO BE AFRAID. The MATERIAL THEY USED MUST BE AT THE LEAST BE INVINCIBLE TO ANY PHYSICAL DAMAGE. AND WHATS THE POINT OF THE STORY THEN?

good story, although my first thought is if he needs and can absorb energy, why does he not go to a black hole or sun or a fusion reactor of some sort rather than humanoids? I agree it makes a great story but the premise is not solid. but it's a solid read with minor mistakes

MC just acts as if a black hole appearing in his room is an annoying but usual thing. “Who turned off the lights in my room?” To “who placed a black hole in my room?”

One day you're going to remember me and how much I loved you… then you're gonna hate yourself for letting me go. “As for lovers, well, they'll come and go too. “Don't cry when the sun is gone, because the tears won't let you see the stars.