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The male protagonist, Lin Yun, traveled through an immortal cultivation family. He wanted to live a stable life, but his family encountered a crisis. After entering the Tianyuan Sect, he realized that he was an "NPC", so he decided to defy the heavens and change his fate. He had become the disciple of his beautiful master, Mu Zixi. His senior sister, Su Xiaoying, also had a unique background. " Return to the Fiery Age " was a good period novel. The protagonist, Liu Hai, created the industrial era after he wore his soul. Although there were flaws such as the male protagonist's early release and the controversy over his emotional line, the overall rhythm was good, his three views were correct, and his industrial knowledge was solid. He was recommended by four stars. "The Great Trickster of the State Preceptor" talked about Wu Wuyu who traveled through time and relied on his mouth to trick him into a healthy and prosperous age. It was interesting. " The Law of the Wasteland " was an online game novel of the Wasteland. It was a four-star novel in the early stage and a three-star novel in the later stage. However, there were many problems such as having too many " ah " at the end of the sentence, complicated settings, and the protagonist being too smooth. " The Creator of the 2D World " was a 2D plagiarist novel. The main character, Xu Rui, was animating in a parallel world. The plot was a little cool, but it was not bad overall. I recommend it. <a href="/?from=ask_words" style="color:red" target="_blank">Read more exciting novels for free</a>

Poor character development can really ruin a novel. If the characters are one-dimensional or their actions don't make sense, it can turn readers off. Also, inconsistent writing style or grammar mistakes can detract from the reading experience.

There were novels similar to " 1:"Phoenix's Fate Is Hard to Disobey", Author: An Xiyue is Me 2. Yunhua Yao Ji, Author: Qi Zong 3."Green Lotus Immortal Clan." Author: A Naughty Xiugou 4."Immortality and Cultivation, Starting from Half a Year of Life." Author: 70-year-old Old Man Cultivation The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1."Phoenix's Life Is Hard to Disobey": Mother said: You only need to do your part, there is no need to give deep feelings. Father said,"We don't do evil, and we can't let evil people bully us." His brothers said,"We will support you no matter what you do." Sister said,"Third Sister, don't worry about me." The son said,"Mom, Dad eats too much." What should Yang Xianrong say? 2.<<Yunhua Yao Ji>> I am a demon exorcist that is not very popular. However, his ability was not weak. Just when I thought that I was going to spend my life calmly slaying demons. I lost my blade. A demon slayer losing his blade is no different from losing his life, but I found another blade. This saber had a human-shaped saber spirit. The following is the story of how I brought the idiotic demon servant and the human-shaped saber spirit with facial paralysis (crossed out) around the world to eliminate demons. Why did he have to exterminate demons? It was not a matter of national hatred. It was purely a matter of profession. This book does not cultivate immortality. 3."Green Lotus Immortal Clan": 6,000 per day (Family, Mortal) He carried a Green Lotus Seed and a scroll of the Green Lotus Creation Technique. He was reborn as the Young Clan Leader of Green Lotus Island and was appointed as the temporary Clan Leader of the clan in the face of danger. He wanted to see how the young man would lead his clansmen on the path of immortality and how he would dominate the three worlds. He would strengthen the clan with the mindset of a reborn person and let the Green Lotus Immortal clan become the number one clan in the Three Realms. 4."Immortal Cultivation, Starting from Half a Year of Life": May I ask, is it too late to start cultivating at the age of 70?