natsuo kirino out

Loved the story and although I would have liked to see the confrontation between Natsuo and the Otsutsuki clan I can understand why you didn’t end up going there. Can’t wait for your next story, keep up the good work.

Honestly, it disgusts me to show pictures of Ai to Natsuo, and also that the author goes to such lengths to give bad endings to heroines he doesn't like. Otherwise, everything else is good, although it has its questionable points. The protagonist didn't seek out knights or anything to strengthen himself, knowing that he's now a champion and that at any moment a god will appear or he'll have a tragic encounter with one due to the luck of champions. Liliana best girl, and Enu best crazy.

so far so good, the Yukino obssession is there like in every urban story but at least it doesn't hammer you in the head about how beautiful she is, beyond a couple of times of course, and the other girls so far act like normal teenagers in a slice of life setting, not gonna lie tho, at some points you wonder if the story isn't done by 100% AI. Still, the onmyoji stuff is cool and Kirino's dad being a character is unexpected but good

I’ll be honest — I clicked this because of the R18 + Harem tags, and for once I didn’t get baited. The author actually delivers. Natsuo’s situation is pure chaos from the start. He loses his virginity to a mysterious girl, only to find out a few days later that she’s now his stepsister. Then his young, sexy English teacher starts getting pulled into the same “stepsister” territory. The domestic tension is thick, awkward, and very intentionally fanservice-heavy. The author doesn’t shy away from the taboo angle or the sexual tension that comes with it, and the R18 scenes that follow feel natural instead of forced. What elevates it above the usual “collect girls and fuck” formula is the Dead Girls Chat Group. Natsuo gets thrown into a system chat full of girls from different worlds who are all destined to die in their original stories. Saving them, interacting with them, and gradually pulling them into his life creates a harem that actually has emotional weight. You’re not just watching him add another body to the list — you’re watching him try to rewrite their fates while dealing with the very real (and very steamy) consequences of having multiple dangerous, attractive women around him. The harem chemistry is strong. The girls have distinct personalities, the jealousy and teasing are present without becoming annoying, and the R18 content is explicit enough to satisfy without turning into pure porn with a thin plot. The author knows when to turn up the heat and when to let the relationships breathe. The mix of slice-of-life awkwardness, sexual tension, and system-powered progression works surprisingly well. No translation stiffness, no obvious AI slop, no NTR, no yuri. Just a straightforward, well-paced, horny, fun story with a unique system hook. That level of care is rare on this platform. (I've read your ATG fanfic twice, and its one of the best cultivation novels/fanfics out there.) If you came here for a proper R18 harem with good writing, strong sexual tension, and a system that actually adds something interesting to the relationships, this one delivers. The stepsister/teacher setup alone is already entertaining, and once the Dead Girls start getting more involved it only gets better. Easy 5 stars. The author is cooking and I respect it. Definitely following.

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