ryunosuke tanaka

Writing Quality is great, although I am reviewing this early on, the usage of grammar and plots are great. Story Development literally shows an instant development, a matured Ryunosuke went back in time would obviously result in a matured Ryunosuke but younger. Character designs, the personality of the characters are greatly written, I could feel their emotions through the texts, unbelievabled. Updating, literally had 4 chapters a day, and each all had 1000+ words. World background, its Haikyuu with OCs and Crossover characters, what did you expect?

The story is great but why did the otaku form before the story who can outplay truck-kun go? And did Tanaka and their personalities meld together or was tanaka's personality overpowering the otaku's causing him to become a husk of his former personality?

I got 4 chapter in, and I'm not impressed at all. Shimizu is Ryunosuke wife, and nobody from fanfiction can't take that from him. I'm dropping this, and of course 1 star too.

It's a good Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 I like the story, the system, the comedy, etc.. It's just that you still use Zhang Miao when his name is Ryunosuke.. It's very confusing.. You should just use Ryunosuke.. I like how he so creative to get elite ninja fragment, but I think MC/Ryunosuke is bullying Fugaku too much (or Fugaku is too unfortunate that his family is often see him when he bleat like goat).. I hope he doesn't tell the future too often, or his knowledge of future will be useless, because it will change the future.. I like his specialty/business in carving wood, it's a good idea... I think he should think about life of other which he summons or will summons.. Maybe built a village in somewhere (Uzushio maybe)... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁👍👍👍