of vishanti

arrogant, ancient one can trap him time loop or ask vishanti for help, open a portal and throw him space , fury can use Gwen to threaten him , how can a non American hold military related company , too arrogant with little power

I am going to drop novel or fanfic which is not doing well and will create a fan made fanfic or novel mostly suggested by you guys. Alice CarlyCarlyCelestial Destructor: A member of the Aspirants, he was sent by the First Firmament to cause as much damage to Eternity as possible. He was confronted by the Avengers, X-Men, Ultimates and other countless heroes and was banished by the magic users with the use of a spell from the Book of the Vishanti.[32]

Nice concept. Plz author don't drop this fanfiction anytime soon. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏.But author one thing I want to say is that if mc ever reaches agamottos level she could probably beat the otsutsuki clan and even use their immortal souls as batteries. In the comics it is not explicitly stated but agamotto is a dimensional lord on the same level as dormant and even if he's not the strongest he was pretty high up on the food chain. Dr strange at his best could only deal with urashiki at most while Stan Lee explicitly stated that even strange could barely last a minute in front of any of the vishanti. Also it is said that he once fought back galactus and repelled him even though barely. An mc with his inheritance well within a decade could probably reach sage of six paths realm quite easily.

The story is good overall, but there’s a bit of a logic issue. Since he’s a wizard from Hogwarts, he’d have to make a contract with the Vishanti to learn sorcery, which basically means selling his soul to them after he dies. That just feels unnecessary when he already has his own magic, which could become just as powerful if developed properly. It’s kind of disappointing to see him go down that route when he has other options. Instead of fully committing to sorcery, why not have him just study it and take inspiration from it instead? He could break down how the Ancient One and other sorcerers use magic and then adapt those techniques into his own style—without needing to rely on some cosmic entity that wants his soul. Another idea is for him to develop his own unique magic based on what he learns. He could figure out how sorcerers manipulate energy and find a way to do something similar using his own magical abilities. Maybe he creates new spells, enchantments, or a whole different way of casting that mimics sorcery without actually becoming a sorcerer. He could also use things like alchemy, runes, or magical artifacts to achieve similar results without making any dangerous deals. Instead of pulling energy from other dimensions like sorcerers do, maybe he taps into ley lines, creates enchanted tools, or finds other magical workarounds. Another cool angle would be for him to find an alternative mentor—someone who isn’t tied to the Vishanti but still knows powerful magic. There’s gotta be lost knowledge or forgotten techniques out there that could let him do some crazy stuff without getting himself roped into a soul-binding contract. Honestly, learning from the Ancient One isn’t a bad idea, but going full sorcerer and selling his soul feels unnecessary when he’s already got so much potential. If it were me, I’d have him take what’s useful from sorcery and make it his own instead of just following the usual path. That way, he stands out more and doesn’t have to deal with the whole “owing his soul to a higher power” thing.