slade dc

Honestly, this ff is for dc fans who havent read the comics, since there's a lot of basic explaining of the dc world, and the mc doesn't appear much. Pretty bad In my opinion, a lot of useless reading, introduction of thebasi dc characters, like slade, robin, lex luthor, members of the JL,Teen Titans, etc.

firstly,in fantasy especially fanfiction anyone can be protagonist hero,villain,janitor,driver etc, there can even be more than 1 pov's as well. but their initial character and changes should be consistent. now,who is your protagonist? it is selina. so,focus on selina's character. selina was shown as a strong, independent woman and an apex predator. a woman of passion and confidence. a woman who could easily abort the child, a woman who didn't even think about informing the father of his child. selina decided slade isn't fit to be father then she decided in raising ryker by herself and she raised her child perfectly untill this point her character is consistent but then ryker got kidnapped. then her original character vanished. a top thief in dc world filled with criminals,research labs and supervillains raising a mutant child as a single mother. but there was no contingency, no tracker. no exercises for home intrusion, nothing. and then she started blaming slade for the kidnapping. a near normal person like selina or slade isn't built by blaming others but by repeatedly failing and getting up especially in a world like dc. if you were going to the route of a strong, independent woman becoming an emotional,weak mother due to worry for her child then you should have written some paragraphs about difficulties of a single mother raising a mutant child in dc and her expectations of support from slade etc etc.

Female lead aurora at least showed some backbone in the beginning when she married slade Wellington in a flash marriage. But story quickly goes downhill, aurora is a complete pushover weak spineless female lead. She has no plan for revenge. Her actions are weird and contradictory (she refused to be her frenemy Jenny’s editor and next chapter changes her mind). So Jenny the villainess and her idiot ex fiancé Liam continue their affair, aurora knows what is going on and she does nothing. Her secret husband slade ends up doing everything for her. Aurora is not a likeable character and I even wonder why she was reborn. She is extremely passive after marrying slade and I have no idea why slade finds her fascinating or lovable. Plotting is slow and characters are one dimensional.

First of all this Joker is just a fraud and the author then tries to turn him into Slade. Also, it’s not even in Marvel lol don’t waste your time

Just have one question, is this translation then it's fine, if not why did MC not kill Jenny? He clearly said he'll kill everyone, especially the Slade part, just listened to his heart beat stop and did nothing else. Like really, you know who Slade is and you left him at that? Anyway good luck Author if it's not translation, if it's translation keep up the good work but it's not my cup of tea.