black hair blue eyes pale skin

The evil people from the kingdom had fair skin and blonde hair, while the better people had black eyes and black hair. This should show what's more important to the author, the story or their worldview.

Kevius Von Svoboda. Pure white hair with bright crimson eyes. Pale skin and slender body.

Storywise it's very good, my only problem are the non-accurate description of few characters compare to the fanfic original source, such as Rhaenys having a silver hair even though her hair was black, Baratheon/Durrandon traits are very strong, that all their lineage born with black hair, and most had blue eyes, although Rhaenys still maintained her Targaryen eyes. Alyssane description also inaccurate, Allysane doesn't look liks typical Targaryen, similar to her daughter Alyssa, she had honey colored hair and blue eyes instead of typical silver/silver-gold hair and purple,violet or lilac eyes, having her white hair due to old age and blue eyes are much more fitting.

Hey there! Author here! I'm writing a review to tell you that I forgot to do somethings in the story. 1- The protagonist shoes are pink slippers 2-G's human form. Hair: light-blue pigtails; Skin and face: big golden eyes, fair skin. Clothes: light blue /black striped knee length dress, purple scarf. 3-Alluca is the nickname of allucaru, the 3rd character. And I'm So Sorry for havin no SANSational puns. (those who played undertale will get it).