jellal x erza

Great chapter, I loved it, but you could have turn the smaller dragon on the island into Acnologia. I'd let Jellal live, if he dies it will cause a lot of trouble after the time skip. If I had a harem there it would include: Irene, Juvia (she has no experience in normal relationships and most likely get her ideas from Erza's smut collection. If make her believe that she will always be loved she probably won't end up a yandere.), Lisanna, Seilah, Ur, Virgo, Demaria, Erza Scarlet, Erza Knightwalker(Keep he hair long but dyed a purple to tell them apart), and MAYBE Ikaruga (the woman with the pink hair from the tower of heaven arc). Jellal X Kagura Gray X Ultear

Mc is a simp, a beta male.. he wants to revolt and Get out of the place by force but jellal Dismiss his plan and erza doEs not believe in hIm even though erza saw jow powerful he was but sTill because erza do not want it then he follows.. very submissiVe.

The story was good however it was ruined when Erza cheated on him with jellal. Author I hope you will change this in your fic. Natsu didn't even do anything except saving jellal again because of her. My whole day has been ruined. Why can't people make fanfic without Ntr. Its just too disgusting.

lucy x Mc please erza and Mira overused and is old

This is by far the best fairy tail fanfic I've read up till date. The writing is awesome and creative. It's slow, but it's so nicely written that I'm never bored or in a hurry for the canon story to start. The main character is smart, has a cool magic and a system. As for the romance. This is just a request but can you please try to use the female characters who r not in any relationship and those who have a bad pairing (*cough* Erza x Jellal *cough*) from the anime for the harem. Honestly, Cana, Mira and Erza are good options in my opinion. Levy is still ok. But Juvia is a bit unusual. Author I love this story and I hope you keep this level of writing up for future chapters.