Harry Potter : Born again into the black family
My life was ordinary. At the age of 14, I was walking on a regular day, heading to school. As I walked down the street, I was thinking about watching the latest film in my favorite series—Harry Potter. In that one, Harry defeats the evil Voldemort. Suddenly, I heard a loud noise. It startled me, and before I could react, everything went black. I had died... and awakened in a new world I never imagined I’d live in. But keep watching, because I was destined to rise to greatness in this world of magic and become one of the strongest wizards it had ever known.
English is not my first language, so if there are any unclear words, I sincerely apologize."
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BW_DIAF · Fantasy
Es la primera vez que leo un fic que la pareja del ML es Hermione, me gusto y fue sencillo. Se debe aclarar que tener a Harry e Ivan como protas en la historia del mundo mágico le quito lo entretenido y se volvió algo forzado, al igual que el trato que hizo el anciano de Dumbledore y Geller, me pareció muy fuera de lugar por parte del anciano. La traducción es un 3/5 mucha confusión con los nombres de los personajes. Dejando de lado todo lo que señale, es una buena historia que te hará querer emparejar a luna con ivan.