hermione ravenclaw

Author put canonical depictions of Harry, Ron and Neville in to Ravenclaw alongside Hermione and MC.. Author was huffing something strong for Ron of all people to end up in Ravenclaw and it takes roughly 70 chapters just to get t9 the sorting ceremony so the fast-paced tag is a BLATANT lie.

It was a decent story untill the mc started telling everyone he met he was a black for no reason. The author probably never read the harry potter books cause the sorting hat can't look at someone's memories it looks at the traits cause if it looked at memories hermione would be a ravenclaw not a gryffindor plus daphne would never be a ravenclaw claw cause of her traits and she isn't pro study like a ravenclaw

The story is great at the beginning, Harry learning magic with Hermione a fair bit before Hogwarts, However, despite being sorted into Ravenclaw with Hermione, the author still went for the rememberball scene which is confusing because the flight lessons should of been split between houses ( Gryffindor & Slytherin) ( Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff) for whatever reason all the houses except Hufflepuff were present and despite not having any prior interaction with Hagrid, the Author decided for Harry to meet and befriend Hagrid so he can give plot clues. All in all if you plan on changing the plot, it shouldn't line up so closely with the original.

I love a S.I story as Hermione. For now it's quite good. I was a little surprised to see Harry go to Griffondor as I thought he would follow her in Ravenclaw but at the end, he doesn't have the soul of a Ravenclaw, I suppose. But I still like this knew Harry : less timid, more willing to use his brain, more outgoing, assured and less manipulable too.

The story is good, but there are few errors like MC is Ravenclaw but shares classes with Gryffindor and Slytherin. How? Lunch too, in great hall. And MC and Hermione don't seem to be close or know anyone from their own house rather than Gryffindor. Other than that, it's good