breeze diary of an bit warrior

One of the better ones in fanfiction in terms of writing. Bit on the slow side might say, but the worldbuilding covers up this slowness and keeps the story interesting. What makes it iffy for me is that some important story developments are being breeze through and just being told in a narration. Thus somehow in my opinion the story sometimes leans more like a biography or a diary. Though it feels like the story is still being set up in the 20+ chapters I have read and might be improved later. Overall, its worth a try in reading!

is it wrong to image if the MC had the Orcid with the diary and 3k world steal system he would be a bit OP

Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull Reads like a diary. Very dull

It’s a great story and lovely characters But the progress is a bit slow …. Sometimes it does feel more like a diary, kinda Thanks for the chapters :)

I love how the author made this! With the diary and the thoughts that the charcter is going through and everything else. the sypnosis is also catchy it could grab readers making people want to read this “diary”. all i could say at the end is that this could improve a little bit but i beleive this will make a Hit! Good luck!