eryn dsmp

Caminantes del Abismo

luciel_707

2019-11-28

First of all the title, just my suggestion its up to you if you change it or not. For me, the title of the book is not too long cause its hard to remember for the readers. Second, in the chapter one the mc and the white haired girl, eryn. Eryn should introduce herself to mc or mc would ask her name, i was confused as first who is this 'eryn' but i found out the whg and eryn are one in a few secs. How did the mc found out her name without ask who is her? And he heard her voice but it was unfamiliar and the girl didn't knew him either so he introduce himself cause she adked his name so it was clear. That's the critical clue that they didn't knew each other from the start,It could be confused the other readers. The flow of the story is great, he's not overpowered from the start well everybody is weak until they became strong as they build to be one. For me its ok whatever overpowered or not but it has to be eyecatching story to not lose my interest to read it. Improve more and more and your book will be love by the readers^^ -luciel_707-

My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical attacks to succeed

kazesenken · Fantasy

391 Chs

Allen_Garsnett

2019-12-12

Summary dauber rumsey ratings syncs syncs drums flies doc slate will all jazz deric such y'all yankee tshirt exum hen Eric steak eryn rub runs roc each roc yeah

Invincible Divine Dragon's Cultivation System

Nine Nine Three · Urban

4612 Chs

Everything starts from contracting Xiao Wu

If it were you, what would you do when you have invincible abilities? Would he choose to have a group of wives and concubines, or would he choose to monopolize power, or would the world be the same? …… The story is neither long nor short. You are welcome to watch.

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Starting from Douluo to change the world

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A Vermilion

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Lord of Logos

" The entire history of philosophy became a battlefield, filled with the bones of the dead." - Hegel, Lectures on the History of Philosophy, Volume I, Introduction This is a fantasy version of the history of Western philosophy, but also a story about knowing yourself. Luo Yidi's group chat: 124146448. Feel free to drop by.

Falling a Reed

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The Princess Regent has gone mad protecting her husband

This book is also known as "Conspiracy with the King." * Xiao Xiang was tricked back by her teacher and was caught in a storm of engagement. Oh, NO! As a 21st century female university student with new ideas, she wanted to stay away from the rich and powerful, away from the feudal scum, and walk her own path with her head held high, and let the evil world go! However, his father had raised his palm in front of him, and the emperor was behind him with his sword! "Let's go back and be my daughter-in-law." The old fox narrowed his eyes and smiled. "I refuse!" The Emperor's eyes turned cold, and he immediately sent out seventy to eighty assassins! Xiao Xiang was speechless. What should he do? His life was in danger. There was a way! He turned around and approached a certain lord who didn't care about politics. He tried to curry favor with him."This lord, I seem to have offended you again. Lock me up." "Why?" he asked with a smile as he savored the wine. "I don't want to see your nephew because he's too stupid." The corner of his mouth twitched. When she turned around, her fiancé appeared. ...... Finally, as someone wished, the future imperial concubine fell off the cliff In a secluded residence in the peach forest in the suburbs, a woman in green wanted to escape through the window, but before her feet touched the ground, her body was already grabbed into someone's arms. "Imperial Uncle, I was wrong." A certain someone cried and begged for mercy. Before she could finish her sentence, her lips were sealed tightly. "If you call me Imperial Uncle again, I won't let you off easily." He carried his daughter back to his room. (Due to the author's confusion, the introduction is different from the content. For specific reference, please refer to the content. The introduction is for reference only.) * PS: There are many storms in the capital. Let's see how the domineering female protagonist protects her husband to achieve hegemony. Shuangjie, mutual favor, strange sword, trickery, game in game, game in game

Eastern fence chrysanthemum

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I'm invincible as a Title Douluo at the beginning of the Douluo game

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Totoro who can write

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