hori x miyamura

The novel overall was okay, and it fit the general schema for a dimensional chat type of story. However, the romance between hori and miyamura was ruined throughout this story. The development of there relationship was not as organic as in the original story between the two and later developments really ruined this fanfic for me. Second, I really did not like the fact that kuroneko actively tried to break up their relationship. Finally, my hopes weredashed when hori and miyamura broke up. Overall, I was a bit disappointed with this novel.

Average.There many problem in this novel. first: The infinite mana is limited.🤔wtf. second:He is a simp. I think the author is scared with Shiba tatsuya. First: This is horimiya fanfic.And the Mc is reincarnated as miyamura.but he is a simp with I'm not against of being a simp but this is Horimiya fan fic so why hori.

aku tidak banyak memberi saran. tulisannya sudah bagus. mudah dimengerti dan tidak bertele-tele. juga tidak mencoba puitis. mungkin ada beberapa kesalahan kayak kata yang terlewat tapi tidak jadi masalah besar. untuk pengembangan cerita sendiri, saya mengerti kalau Izumi tidak tahu kelanjutan horimiya dan dia punya ingatan dari miyamura. yang jadi pertanyaan itu, apa sifat Izumi dan miyamura sama? mungkin Izumi terpengaruh atau bagaimana, bukannya saya mau protes, tapi menurutku lebih baik kalau ada sedikit perbedaan di sifat "miyamura" dan Izumi. maksudku sewaktu berinteraksi dengan Hori dan yang lain. karena interaksi yang berbeda dengan karakter terasa lebih menarik dan tidak terkesan plagiat. desain karakter, yah sudah standar menurutku. mau bagaimana lagi otaku sudah, truck-kun sudah, reinkarnasi sudah, cheat sudah. ya... standar. memang. tapi bukan berarti mengurangi kualitas. stabilitas pembaharuan untuk sementara baru ada 3 chap, jadi tidak tahu bagaimana kelanjutannya. semoga tidak drop. latar belakang dunia... hmm... ini cukup mainstream kalau aku boleh jujur. dunia anime dan bisa berpindah ke dunia anime lain cukup mainstream. sayangnya seleraku juga mainstream. wkwkwk. good luck author. as a fellow holosimp, I'll support you. thanks for your hardwork

I wrote a long review before they kicked me out, really hate webnovel. Since I don't want to write my long review again, this is the summary: Cliché plot line, cliché reincarnation, cliché system, cliché Izumi miyamura body takeover, cliché world background (There is magic and supernatural in this story). The system's quests can be declined GOod news: The mc is not a harem-seeking mc, but a mc seeking to be popular with the help of his system, so single pairing will obviously be Hori Kyouka. Writing quality is good, chapter length is good. As for the other 3 criteria, since it's only 2 chapters in, I can't really judge, so it's an automatic 5 stars. Good to read when you're bored. But if you're here looking for new interesting things, this will not be for you.

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