izuku quirks

Really interesting idea with OP quirk, but MC is rather weak in terms of Power and Speed, coz Shigaraki and Izuku is stronger than him without their quirks. Moreover i guess smthing is happend with author, so doesn't even know rather we would continue write this novel

Honestly, this could've become good, but everything is meh. The characters are basically clones of everything, just with different names. Everything is dumbed down to make Izuku look good and smart. For example, his fight with Katsuki was bs. Are you saying you have a minor time manipulation quirk and yet weren't able to win with it alone? And for Izuku to win, he injected multiple quirks into himself and an upgrade of the drug trigger. Nothing is consistent, now in the recent chapters (20+) it's just Izuku having h#rny moments with Toga while beating on some grunts. Another thing to note is that, the villains around him seem quirkless. For real, Izuku always manages to beat every villain somehow and some way through sheer luck, massive plot armor basically. This could have become good, but wasted potential with how it's going. Anyway, thanks for the read but I'm out.

Welp, better than what I expected. With the addition of The Incredibles I thought it was going to be a jumbled mess, yet somehow this one did it pretty well. Well, other than the power level difference between MHA cast (Students) and The Incredibles a little bit too wide. Maybe Izuku is the only one capable of fighting them, but he needs the OFA with all the seven other quirks.

I gave this rating because the author is very imprecise in the development of the world of MHA (the quirks awaken in 3/4 years) and honestly I didn't understand how old Izuku and Bakugo are because if they are the same age as the protagonist, a one-year-old child could hardly speak and say a complete sentence so this leads me to think that they are 3/4 of an age difference because Bakugo awakened his quirk (and therefore I don't understand why there was a chapter where he said that Izuku couldn't walk yet) yes so it was all a bit confusing... however if these errors are corrected the fanfiction would be much more fluid to read. (Sorry for the confusion, I'm writing with Google Translate)

I just started reading this story, and it is a great one so far. I love how you wrote in the history of the rangers and the awakening of Quirks, while maintaining separate realities. The thing about Izuku's attitude, I can see where he is coming from, after all there is only so much one person can take before two things happen. they give up on life or they start pushing back.