kuki urie

I enjoy reading the story. The mysteries and suspense is very good.It is just sad why Urie has to kill herself to prove her point. The character development of the ML is a little bit slow. It is a good thing that the female lead is not the helpless type. Hopefully she can get out of her predicament soon before she gets hurt.

Even I think while playing a game what if suddenly a glitch occurs and I get trapped inside a game to finish it? So, this story seems excited to me with adventurous gaming stuff inside the story. Since the story is still developing so, cannot clearly tell about Urie's characters. A descriptive world is being designed by the author...So do not wait and just add the book in your library. All the best for the contest, author.

this should be my second most liked genshin fanfic beside the breezing teyvat one since im more familiar with the latter than this but my golly was this a good read. it may only have 39 chapter as of now but with the updating speed its oretty fast. the show is fast paced but consistent and doesnt really digress from the game that much aside from knowing characters like yelan and kuki early from some description in the text. the background of the original body will mostlikely be in volume 3 or 4 and i cant wait. it felt like an hour only passed since ive read this and im very much looking forward to future update lazy_author

Well ... it started off well, but then he made a decision using his powers that was stupid ... incredibly stupid. He has an immortal healing factor that allows his body to get stronger as he destroys it through exercise, basically a saiyan"s zenkai or like when kuki urie from Tokyo Ghoul:re exercises with extremely heavy weights to destroy his body to increase the spread of his kagune through his body or increase his rc cell count, I forget which it is but it's the same premise. After he does this he gets cosmic power from Captain Marvel but then gets nerfed so he doesn't actually get it for 10 years and his healing factor takes a massive debuff. After this he randomly gets a photographic memory from Charles Xavier even though it was previously stated that he already had a photgraphic memory. After this he visits Charles and then meets his great grand uncle and then dies in his sleep and meets god again and turns into a woman. That's about it read the rest if you want cause I'm not, but this was a summary of the first 8 chapters to let you know how the story is gonna go. However, even though it isn't my cup of tea, the writing quality itself is good, grammatically at least, but there are a **** ton of plot holes that are glaring even considering it is a fan fiction. The world building itself is like okay, it doesn't really matter cause it's a fan fic of wolvering great grand nephew who turns into a gender bend spider man. It is X-Men x MCU crossover. Just normal ****. Expect gender bend and a lot of dumb decisions and plot holes and introduction of certain things that serve no purpose like the mc becoming a doctor to help his sister, which led to nowhere and wasn't mentioned. Good grammar, ****ty main character and plot.

The story is good, very original compared to the other MHA fiction. It is not the classic story of the hero and does not follow the vicissitudes that we all know, which I appreciated very much. Unfortunately, there are many negative sides, impossible to miss, since they are objective problems and have nothing to do with my preferences. Let's start with Erza and Kiku. Kiku: From the way the author described it, you don't understand her emotions. At 4/5 years old, she blushes as soon as she meets Suzuki and here is my first "why?". Her relationship with Mc is confused. Kuki can sleep on Suzuki's legs without feeling the least bit of shame, but when she sees him without a shirt (which she should be used to seeing) she blushing randomly. Shortly after they declare themselves and there is a completely normal kiss. Scene of the appointment is promoted. Erza: What is she doing in the world of MHA? But it's the minor problem, just think it's an alternative universe of BHA, where Erza was born in this world. Mc is from earth, didn't he recognize her? Relationship with Suziki already better than Kuki, except for their first kiss, totally exaggerated. Was there really any need to enter the tongue in this way? She was agitated and anxious and after hearing that Suzuki also has feelings for her, boom, let's use the tongue! Then there are also problems on the characterization of the protagonist, initially he does not want to kill and then "does nothing, sooner or later I will have to do it", he was trained to kill and various things. No, it is not an evolution of the character, he was already mature right away, with clear ideologies, he was not a classic child. Maybe something happened that made him completely change his mind, but for now it doesn't seem like that at all. All in all, I recommend the story, hoping that the characterization errors will gradually decrease.