httyd fanfiction hiccup leaves berk and comes back powerful

I hope you continue with this story I don't know why but this makes me feel like a child again like I'm seeing berk for the first time it hits especially hard since School of Dragons shut down a few months ago its the best fa fiction about httyd I've ever read

As promised, I will leave a review to the best of my ability. Writing Quality- Overall, few grammar mistakes and the pacing is done well Story Development- As there aren't many chapters, I'll instead mention its potential. So far, it's hard to say if the book will, or is meant to, last very long. "Behemoth" has been established to have overwhelming strength but no motive other than keeping the status quo. For the future, if you plan to make this a longer fanfiction, I would suggest coming up with some motive that would align with the character, maybe for observing or even helping Berk(perhaps curiosity about Toothless?) Character Design- "Behemoth" so far has not shown- or even shown a lack of- character depth. His only noticeable ambition is to be recognized as above all other things, and while he can back it up with actual strength, he lacks any other sort of motive or ambition so far. It seems that "Behemoth" has familiarity with Berk and/or its people, so maybe that could be expanded on in the future. Update Stability- Not much to be said here, so 5 stars (though chapter 1 is in the wrong volume, you automatically get routed to chapter 2) World Background- While it's HTTYD, I will specifically mention the background of the fanfic itself. "Behemoth" has mentioned a nostalgia and familiarity with Berk, but it is as of yet not explained why he knows of it. Overall, I'm tired af rn but it's an alright fanfiction so far. Vastly better than other fanfictions I've read in the past.

I have been wanting to read a httyd fanfiction therer are others put nothing like this. It has medium WQ, great SU, great SD, great CD, and great WB. I hope this Continues now and in the future and I will be a fan from now on.

Like this is great read But seriously this man is the definition of "dad went out to buy milk and never came back. seriously goes for magic school and says is back in 3 years comes back in 1 and then leaves for half a year promises come back after half a year but after about a year? never came back home

To be honest the MC is an idiot that does tings without thinking. Killing his teammates + 3 of the 7 swordsmen from the start twice and is the only one that comes back alive. No one does anything about it and “thinks he is inesense” Leaves the village for like a month with involving the musikage and comes back like nothings happened. So none of it makes sense for the Naruto world.