nanami x mahito

writing and all like gramer are good but i drop this shit cause of 3 reason 1— mc has meta knowledge he knows that junpei will die he has many time to save them as he was with yuji at that time but he make up excuses to flirting with shoko and join the fight way later went yuji and nanami start fighting mahito he even let mahito run away. 2 clearly there is harem tag even though the title is maki is my girlfriend 3 it is harem tag as well as the system type is sleep with girl then copy the power but mc doesn’t do that making the system useless

I have 1 problem with the writing. When the MC was reborn his mother named him Nanami, but then the MC acted like his name was Kento, so which is it. If it is Nanami, then his son's name should be Akira Kento and not Akira Nanami. If the MC's name is Kento then every time you write his full name it should be Kento Nanami, as every character in this story has their family name second. Also within the same scene you have some people call him Nanami and others call him Kento.

Fucking loving it please continue. Mahito Being mahito in this scenario is really good please keep cooking and don't stop it is really a amazing experience

The content pretty good but it take soooooooo long for the new chapters, sans is quite close to the original but in the recent chapters his appearance is quite blurr, i mean he said they gonna give Mahito bad time but in the later chapter he just wait for yuji to beat Mahito and being dragged into Mahito's Domain

mahito in shadow slave fanfiction? peak.