iruma kun fanfic

Fun read so far, its's very rare to see an Iruma-kun Fanfic and the plot is actually enjoyable!! Hope this fanfic continue!!!!

finally an iruma kun fanfic i thanks. I am curiously following where this story will go, it was a good start. .

this will dooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!

I'll give it 5 star for a fact it was a iruma-kun fic.

3/4/2/4/3 Total Points: 16/25, 3.2 average Tl;dr: An OC insert in Iruma-kun that replaced him, no other visible changes This one is pretty standard, it’s not great, not terrible. But if you’re interested in a fanfic on Iruma-kun, there’s little to no changes in the plot. Writing Quality: 3 It’s not bad, an average read but most of it is pretty mechanical. Maybe the use of AI but I’m not gonna point fingers unless stated and I didn’t noticed it. Not much else to say. Updating Stability: 4 Only reason why it isn’t a 5 is cause once again there isn’t much change in the storyline. In fact the chapters actually follow the manga pages down to the chapter and cliffhanger nearing a 1:1 ratio, and it’s why I was suspecting AI. Story Development: 2 Once again it’s directly following Iruma-kun down to how the MC has no close relatives, lives alone/in isolation, has a huge appetite, falls down the canyon and heals the baby monster in it, and that’s where I stopped and decided to write this review. It’s painful, Iruma-kun has some really high quality visual comedy that is hard to put into words and it’s why the task of making an Iruma-kun fanfic so daunting. It’s just that it’s such a shame that my first ever interaction with a fanfic about it follows the main storyline beat by beat with cliffhangers included. Character Design: 4 I rate this one higher because of the concept of a Nephilim. A half angel, half demon child. The issue is, that he only gets this form AFTER he signs the contact with Sullivan, unless it’s a multiversal essence thing or a system thing it would maybe be ok? But that’s stretching it, and there was no explanation for it whatsoever. Our MC has that ‘secretly incompetent’ kind of trope and all sorts of misunderstandings and acts pile up which is not the worst thing, and it’s prolly the only part where our Author actually writes. World Background: 3 It’s Iruma-kun, you’re not gonna win any awards if you’re not gonna invest time in expanding this wacky world. It’s generic underworld with Japan comedy sprinkled in, there isn’t much else to say. So in the end it’s an OK read for anyone getting into Iruma-kun without reading the manga (idk why you’d ever do that) and to follow the main plotline with no literal consequential deviations.