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I dont care about the how good the story is or it being yuri but you had me at sans (Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale sans Undertale)<--[it's funny how after i type sans it thinks I'll want Undertale after it and when I put Undertale it thinks I want sans]

topissime à lire sans hésiter, foncer sans attendre

So far, its great. Its original, only slightly uses sans powers but isn't really sans, world building is good, mc's characters is good, so its worth a read. Definitely hoping for more chapters, keep up the good work author.

writng quality good so far, no mistakes in grammar. World background and story development will be 5 as it is a world hopping one. 5 stars in CHARActer design as i like what you done to sans and chara. Overall 5/5