writers notes

I’m giving it a 5 star based on the synopsis alone webnovel writers need to to take notes.

To all the AI 'writers' flooding webnovel with your soulless cr*p: Take notes. This is how real writing is done. [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]

An excellent novel, and I love it, but only if you hadn't stolen it from Emmanuel! You even stole his chapter notes! Usually, I wouldn't mind, but he's one of my favorite writers, so it's shameful of you to steal the novel, literally even his chapters. He reached chapter 13 and stopped, and you literally stopped at the same chapter.

I am a new author and open to constructive criticism. My target is small as to write 1000 chapters or more. The story will progress like how Spider Man started low and ened up fighting with villains like Thianos, The only difference is our MC is the most important character here but you won't be able to stop yourself from loving other characters too. Do leave a review and comment, because new writers overthink a lot and the only solution of it is the appreciation of reader. Thanks.

The story starts out fairly good but instantly goes downhill. At around chapter 30 you lose interest instantly and feel bored at how slow the story is developing. Not to sound rude but the authors writing is not captivating enough for me to become hooked; my only advice to the author is to take notes from experienced writers. Don’t give up on this story author, it’s quite promising and you should be pleased and proud.