aizawa mha

That's great, it's just that why does every MHA fanfic that has a Rumi love interest have to be with the main timeline? Why not just be born according to Rumi's birth year? It's better and can be fresher for story exploration. And again, that age would be better because it's already Prime time. Maybe you can make a classmate of Aizawa, the mic presenter, nemuri.

This is a pretty well written MHA fanfic with an oc. You don't see that too often. The MC's quirk is pretty simple but has one the best potential to be a god like being in the MHA universe. His family background isn't too shabby and it serves as a good way to affect some characters in the series early on. The MC's character development is ok, no cringe worthy moments yet. And one last thing for the people that say that things are different from the original series, this is a AU( alternative universe) things will be different, like the hero ranking has a minor difference (the MC's dad is or Was the second ranking hero followed by Endeavour), Aizawa's dad makes an appearance.

This is definitely one of the top MHA fanfics ive read on here, you can tell the author put their all in it. The only thing I want isn't really a criticism but more of a wish, I want Kaminary to fail, like this big failure which makes him almost want to give up. Not because I hate his character or anything but just like Aizawa said at first, he's too confident, too confident that everything will work out the way he thinks it will.

I checked the chapter names and found "Eri x aizawa" so yeah zero stars cause WTF!?