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A story about a worm, with a good plot. I don't mind if you add characters, as long as they're not just girls. For example, you could add Danny Fenton and Rex the Generator.. If you add more women, I'm with Gwen

Me gusta mucho tu historia usar a Danny Fenton es novedoso la verdad tiene muchos poderes OP y si estuviera en Marvel o el anime sería un mega jefe nivel dios , muchos no saben sobre su cantidad de poderes prácticamente de todo , pueden buscar si no lo creen vale la pena tu historia espero que continúes con el bien trabajo

Honestly, the author needs time skip here. cause I really don't enjoy cabrera and others building their guild. We don't need to know everything about guild making and side character's pov. MC needs more screen time cause he is the center of the novel, his character development, power development. What did he do with the loot and how he gonna use it, how he gonna train his 5 new subordinates(slaves). After, showing these points in the next few chapters, the author should time skip.

This novel is basically like “Gourmet of Another World” and “Black Tech Internet Cafe System” with horror elements thrown in. Instead of a restaurant/cafe you have a huanted house, instead of cooking/gaming you have scaring customers, and instead of looking for new ingredients/games you are looking for new ghosts to add to the haunted house. As of right now I have read up to at least 500 chapters. The horror element is actually pretty good and at the very least will give you goosebumps. In terms of fighting against the supernatural, you might want to lower your expectations. The mc is not gonna be like Alexander Anderson from Hellsing, shoving bibles up ghost butts. Nor is he gonna like Danny Fenton from Danny Phantom, blasting ghost rays. At the very best the mc is like season 1 episode 1, Dean and Sam, from the show “Supernatural” in terms of physical and combat prowess but without all the cool weaponry. But he does have a good trump card up his sleeves which is his pokemons, which I think is kind of lame. That’s right, he sends his pokemons/ghosts he collected to fight other pokemon/ghosts in the wild or other pokemon trainers. Which is not bad per say but more of a personal perference. There is also the fact the mc does not prepare enough when going ghost hunting. If you know ghosts are real and you go ghost hunting, I expect you to be armed to the teeth with supernatural knowledge and weaponry and be wearing you ghost repellent undergarments. But this dude goes in with a hammer and his pokemons. Do I even have to say how boned a Pokemon trainer without any Pokemons is, in a Pokemon world? But besides that, this is a pretty great novel, definitely recommend a read.