kny breathing style ideas

I thought it was reasonably good! Someone commented that it was just another Chinese farming story, and so far I'm enjoying it. I like the breathing techniques like in Kny; it would be cool if Yoriichi taught other characters how to use them.

Demon Slayer: Perverted Breathing Style.......................................................................................................................................................................... .

The amount of research and time out into developing this new breathing style... It's already enough for this kind of review. ^_^ keep it up. :)

It has a good concept at least, but I cannot continue reading this simply because I cannot stand again some bull****. But maybe it will be better I don't know I hope readers here that vote this novel know better. The interaction between character itself is a great dialogue between characters is logical and have emotion in it. The concept is unique because I rarely found novel/fanfic where MC still life in his universe. The bad thing is how is a start, first of all, revenge against some chick and man because ntr maybe on a larger scale it will be in testing but in this case, it shallow you already strong from the first lottery why you need to jump to another universe in the first place to take ravage to some kind random and normal scum. The system itself is unbalanced as **** maybe it will work if the plot makes it a little random, I mean, for example, you are in KNY world and boom from a lottery you get Nichirin blade and you want to make breathing style and boom from a lottery you get the breathing Manual. The plot armor is not plot armor and becomes bullish*t, plot armor is a chance to survive and lucky at the random chance and critical moment to push the story forward, on this story however it gives anything player needs from the lottery that not a special ones but the daily one making store system useless. And somehow except for author we lost track for MC inventory and somehow random thing get inside inventory without readers knowing WTF happens. And the plot, in six months of training MC, makes a style stronger than sun breathing style and name it dragon style and now I know it getting worse. The first interaction between him and ubuyasikhi he literally says "I don't want to brag, but I made a breathing technique stronger than the sun breathing.', make it worse, MC are foreigner comes from far land doesn't know about the demon or demon slayer and somehow make or used style that you claim stronger than their ancestor's sun breathing, at this point, it becomes unbearable to read. I do have fun at first reading this at first even there many anomalies or error but I hit my limit I hope for other readers to read it first before judging it.