One Word Changed, Characters in Chaos
Ye Xiao transmigrated into a world that combined several books, becoming the true heiress who was finally found.
She thought she would finally have good days ahead.
But it turned out, the Ye Family were all antagonists!
Thankfully, she had a golden finger that could modify the plot.
The elder brother's fiancee was pregnant with someone else's child, and married him under duress. Seven years later, her genius son found his real father, and in pursuit of a family reunion, drove the elder brother to suicide.
This time.
The heroine said tearfully, "I really do like you."
Just add a word.
The heroine said tearfully, "I really do like your money."
The second brother was a god-like actor, pursued by an innocent young actress. However, the jealous patron behind the innocent actress flew into a rage and ruined the second brother's life.
The innocent actress weakly fell into the second brother's arms.
Just change one word.
The innocent actress weakly bounced into the second brother's arms.
Everyone was stunned. A three-meter jump on the spot, the Olympics welcome you.
The third brother was a god in E-sports, with an assistant who was a klutzy sweet fool, always causing trouble. Eventually, she caused a huge disaster, and when the third brother fired her in a rage, he was accused of being cold and heartless by everyone.
The klutzy sweet fool blinked her big eyes: "I'm sorry, I really didn't mean it."
Remove a word.
The klutzy sweet fool blinked her big eyes: "I'm sorry. I really did mean it."
Ye Xiao herself fared even worse, constantly being humiliated by the fake heiress and her bratty boyfriend, ending up in a miserable state.
This time.
The male lead walked up to her with a knife.
Just change to.
The male lead knelt down in front of her with a knife.
Start by kneeling and repenting properly!
As she modified the story, the fate of the whole family of villains changed, and she, too, became the super beloved of the family.
The Sheep Catching Stars · Urban
Actually really like the direction and concept of this fic. Template system but can’t use cliche or broken characters, and not starting as a random student in Kuoh. Issues in this fic are Grammar.Desperately needs Spacing, Capitalization, and more uses of figurative language. Story could use more Life or relaxation moments, and longer character interactions to show relations. So far a 3/5 with really good potential.