sao asuna x kirito

Haven’t read it. But it already commits one of the three SAO fanfiction sins. 1. Asuna as main heroine 2. Robbing Kirito of all of his chances, abilities, gear, and plot relevance 3. Making Kirito a woman for any reason. Trash.

Classic SAO fanfic committing of the 3 sins. Making Asuna, someone so important for the original plot and Kirito’s entire emotional arc, the main heroine for your fanfiction. Trash enough said.

Plz make Red x asuna Kirito x suguha Chris x the ggo player/liz(blacksmith) Hmm maybe give a special ability to red like kirito's duel wielding That's all for now And lol 1 ****era If u don't know how to appreciate a good novel go suck your milk

I suggest you also give a quest to go to kirito's world and let him enter SAO where every can't log out and make him defeat the final boss also make asuna fall for him hahahahah

Well, we can't not have the shameless author review, can we? There's nothing much to say that hasn't already been said in the synopsis or in the first chapter. This is a novel I've been wanting to write for a long time, and I just finally got around to it. The MC is an original character, but he is just another player in SAO, and won't overshadow Kirito, nor will he know anything about the future. Also, the Kirito X Asuna pairing still stands, but for the other girls who are kept pinning for Kirito in the original, I plan on changing things. What exactly, even I am unsure. That's about it. I hope you enjoy, and please leave suggestions, comments, and reviews!