mha vigilantes deku

It's crap, powerfull MC, behavior of the young and naive Lvl 1 npc who dies in the first mission... something like Deku from MHA in the first episodes.

it was a cool idea and all, but hate the ìncest and weird side of mha, like deku and his own mom, and then the mc personality, it's never appealing to read fics like this,

The story is really good so far, can't wait to this develop into more. MHA vibes but it's better in my opinion, MHA has a very whiney character while here the mc is not whiney and his power is better than deku's in NY opinion

it is a great story, if not a little dark. the critique I would give is that it is too dark. Deku was always the light in the MHA universe who did what was right even if that is hard. with the darker world elements (which is a great twist btw) it would be nice to see Deku win against that darkness. So far, either Venoms rage has made Deku darker then normal or even out sight snuff out Deku's light and take over. I am assuming this is story beat or development for character growth. I just wish to see Deku's light coming through more.

the idea is great, the execution is meh, I'm only on chapter five and the stupidity of the main character is astounding. the main character seems to think he is in Marvel or DC where vigilantes are at least tolerated but in MHA they don't tolerate vigilantes, yet he went out of his way to find and stop criminals, I would understand if he was going for the vigilante rout but he isn't, he is going for the hero rout, not only that but he did this in front of an ATM so there is definitely video evidence of him committing a crime.