The Empress only loves the country
In one day, Xie Jinhua became the Empress of the Jing Dynasty who was assassinated and fainted at the Mid-Autumn Festival banquet. After she woke up, the Emperor not only ignored her, but also treated her as a punching bag.
Until she couldn't take it anymore,'Screw the etiquette rules, screw the virtuous empress, I want to be the current Wu Zetian, I only love money and the country.'
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In the Hall of Diligent Government:
The Ninth Imperial Uncle, who was usually stern and unsmiling, said,"Jin 'er really didn't disappoint."
Xie Jin Hua: What's wrong?"
......
"Hey, hey, hey, you're squashing the memorial I just approved."
"Is the memorial more important than me?"
"Memorials!"
"Is the memorial better looking or am I better looking?"
"You look good, you look good!"
A certain someone immediately went to the table and propped his chin with both hands, staring at her.
"Then look at me, I'm prettier than the memorial."
She reached out and rubbed his head lovingly.
"Stop fooling around, Imperial Uncle!"
The black-bellied little wolfdog turned into a little puppy, and the weak empress turned into the empress dowager who was in charge of a country.
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My honest thoughts: Writing quality: 3/5 - Incorrect use of Punctuation. A lot of words in the middle of the sentences are capitalized. - Strange and inconsistent use of single quotes and double quotes: 'World', ''Moon Light'', 'Sky'. Sometimes conversations don't get quotes. Other times, action descriptions are put in quotes: ''After she jumped down from the bed Ye Ruoxie didn't panic, but adjusted her dress and hair, afterward she looked at the fainted maid.'' You should work out a rule and stick with it. Story 3/5 - Spirit, Array, Awakening, etc. The story seems to require some knowledge of xianxia or wuxia tropes and concepts. But you should restrain yourself. Don't throw new terminologies left and right without context or explanation. Character 2/5 - I don't like any of the characters. They don't seem to have any motivation or personality. But that's just me. World BG 3/5 (?) - The world is confusing. Cultivation is the norm here, but you referenced KFC and so on.