jiraiya x orochimaru

If you are going to make 4 ninjas of: Tsunade, Jiraiya and Orochimaru you should change the name. Sannin means 3 ninjas, there cannot be a fourth, I recommend you put Yonnin

me gusta pero enserio que espero su magekyo sharingan eterno o algun nuevo desarrollo para mantenerse al dia con sasuke y naruto, ademas que espero que tambien siga a orochimaru porque no creo que tsunade o jiraiya lo haga mejor

My boy Itachi is going through it! From awakening his Sharingan at the Hokage ceremony to being taken on an S-rank mission by Jiraiya almost immediately after graduating (lol, 1 day of school!). Kitahara is the chaotic good influence he needs. The scenes where Kitahara tries to "protect" Itachi are both funny and kinda sweet. The plot with Danzo and Orochimaru is heating up!

As always the translator has done an excellent job and the the translation is without any mistakes. The story itself however is so bad I'm honestly doubting if the author has even watched the anime. The MC just got transmigrated he is already as if he is the original Jiraiya(not to fool people, but literally as if he is Jiraiya), the MC have no self pride and lets Tsunade walk all over him, the MC's obsession with pursuing Tsunade is too illogical, Danzo is acting way too weird (Danzo actually joke with one of his Root Shinobi about his wife being a w****, and he always address Hiruzen as Hokage-sama, like what the fuck?), Danzo's Root Shinobi are cursing Danzo in their thoughts, original Jiraiya is described as dead last and completely untalented, the timeline is completely wrong (in this story during the Second Shinobi World War Jiraiya and Tsunade and Orochimaru are only Chunin while in the anime they are elite Jonin who could fight Hanzo), Tsunade actually invites both Orochimaru and Jiraiya to restaurants multiple times and pay from her own money (yes, the same Tsunade who is always gambling all her money away), Tsunade needs Jiraiya's help in learning Ninjutaus and in Chakra Control, etc etc. Also, Tsunade here is portrayed as an asshole and she is so annoying I really don't understand how the author thought someone would enjoy reading about such a character. It's also very annoying that despite her being such a b****, the MC is still constantly licking her boots and pursue her. Those are only a few points I took the time to write, but almost everything in this fanfic is wrong. I really tried to read more chapters and not jump to conclusions, but at chapter 40 I gave up.