ghouls kagune

1. The main character's knowledge is inconsistent, sometimes he knows everything but sometimes he doesn't know something he should know. 2. Calling other characters by their full names makes the language feel very stiff, for example: "Touka" becomes "Kirishima Touka." 3. Adding something unnecessary, for example: secret laboratory room in ward 24, black-skinned eyeless ghouls, ancient ghouls who can't use kagune. 4. Calling the "One-eyed Owl" "Eto Yoshimura" is important to note that Eto Yoshimura's identity or name is only known to the Aogiri Tree's top brass like Tatara.

Really good so far can’t wait for more we been needing more Tokyo ghouls fanfics

Honestly feels like a copy of tokyo ghoul, with viral mutants instead of ghouls. Sjejdjjfjfjrjrjtkrrjriuffjfrnrjejeejejfjddhdjejejdjdkdodjcnfnejeiri73477574388384858i22i30182848401018475578382385842010103948573728 writ 8821910204030204302985485 it 8399q9 quote 949o

Pretty much a male human version of Rize that hunts ghouls to sate his hunger with almost no selfcontrol. The only reason the ”good ghouls” aren’t massacred by him is that they don’t have the same scent as those who prey on human which for me is a terrible plot device. It would have been better if the MC actually had some semblance of control over his urges but that was too much to ask.

It's actually a pretty fine tokyo ghoul fanfic nice, anyway putting that aside the only thing that bothers me is actually the kagune and kakuja he wishes for because it ain't one of the final versions but oh well still a good wish