writing combat scenes

Love the writing style; the combat scenes are very intense, and the idea of showing emotions with their eyes is very creative. Looking forward to the next chapter!

very enjoyable fan fiction, i wish the author could be more creative in power utilisation and get better at writing the action/fighting scenes and gives us an amazing hand to hand combat scenes. overall it was an amazing story, thank you very much author for this story. P.S ( just my own opinion) I've trained in multiple martial arts and whenever i read action scenes and hand to hand combat scenes, i always imagine it in my head and try to replicate it in my imagination if the aforementioned action is possible and therefore i enjoyed your writing in fighting scenes and hope you get better at it and be more structured at writing action scenes. that's it. [img=Smiling face with halo]

It is an action-packed story. Expect for martial combat in almost every chapter. I like the detailed narrative the author has managed to artistically feature during combat scenes. I find it inspiring like me who wishes to write intricate and poetic martial combat scenes. Kudos to the author! What I am looking forward now is the character development. I have read up to Chapter 18 of this book. So far, it has been a roller-coaster ride.

Honestly, nothing to complain about with this novel. This writing is high quality, the characters are fleshed out and believable, the world building is great, and the fight scenes/styles are believable. There’s noticable dread when characters enter combat. Please keep writing and posting. I hope more people find this novel and it gets the recognition it deserves.

Generic author review here. I will be continuing this novel for a decent while as I enjoy writing it. This is a more laid back type of novel but there is the needed combat scenes now and then, some deeper subjects such as suicide and questions of life are also explored in the novel. hope you enjoy.