veronika decides to die cast

Truthfully speaking its good altho quite common i kinnda like the system/modern/rebirth etc, but I just hate the fact that the system decides his life and death. Srsly... 'if u dont do this u will die'

There are more than a few typos, but my main qualms are mainly that I just don't see a point of writing characters for them to die. Rip Vixra. I still have 0 clue what his class does as well which I guess is good and bad. The MC has a likeable personality, but if every character not written into the main cast is just going to die, why bother?

You cant say that he lived in a live or die world for 10 years and then make him come back and do mistakes that even basic rookies do. Trying to bring the main cast into the story is really poorly written but other than that the story was pretty ok not that bad. Could use some more thinking into plot.

Love both the concept the characters and the supporting cast. Only one point of criticism, the author did an actually wonderful job in make the mc and some of the support cast growth organically but both the avatar and co look more like straw man bidimensional and extremely foolish I won’t spoil anything because it’s a genuinely good writing but a good antagonist in my opinion is either someone so disgusting you want to see him die or someone gray and compelling wile the avatar is simply retarded forgive my language.