anemo gnosis

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Probably AI written and some parts are straight up skipped to give you guys a Idea. 1. After MC got his EMS the fight against Osial (where he apparently severed 3 of his heads wasn't included. As of now the author still doesn't bother to correct it) 2. Getting the pronoun wrong for certain characters completly wrong Qiqi gets called a "he/him" almost 100% of the time. Hutao also gets called "he/him" but other female characters is 90% of the time correct. 3. Story inconsistency that makes this "completely" unenjoyable. To name a few examples. The Lady aka. Signora was supposedly spared because MC said to Raiden Ei that it isn't a good look for her to kill a Snezhnayan Diplomat. And they "supposedly" disscussed their trade (gnosis for common goods like food, metall, money and so on) with her and let her go. But later on in a discussion with Diluc where he paid Ventis Tab with information. He gave Diluc the information that Signora was killed and implied that he killed her (by not answering and only smiling at Dilucs question wether he killed her). This is the most glaring example of story incosistency. Could have given you another 23 reasons of why this is only a 1 star with mistakes that "could habe been easily prevented" by just a brief proof reading. But nope author did like absolutely 0% proof reading which is why some paragraphs appear either twice or tripple of the times... in a single chapter.... If you are wondering wether I just read the first few chaps.... nope currently am at chapter 173.....

Sheesh. More people need to write reviews. Come on guys. Anyways, to summarize what I’m about to say: read this story if you enjoy hoyoverse games. Where to start? If the synopsis didn’t properly summarize everything, this story is essentially Venti getting isekaied to the hsr world and how he impacts the plot. However, this story manages to dodge pitfalls that similar stories fall in, and becomes a masterpiece. The reason I dislike most fanfics in the hoyoverse community is because they focus too much on smut/romance. While these novels are good every once in a while, it’s incredibly difficult to write a proper fanfic with plot and character progression if the sole purpose of the story is to see Zhongli get laid with Childe. This story manages to subvert all of my expectations and gives the reader something that this community lacks: a story. Something that charismatic bards can sing about… something that heroic adventurers can aspire to for their journeys. Instead of needless fan service, we get genuine character development. Watching how characters such as Bronya develop across her arc was incredibly meaningful. The author managed to change her character while still staying true to the original source material. Almost no one here acts out of character or without reason. The characters in this novel are worth reading about. Speaking of characters, I’d like to talk about Venti. At the beginning, the story hints at “Venti” being transmigrated from Earth. In other words, it’s a random goober who gets transferred to hsr in the body of the anemo archon. Whilst this plot point will likely get uncovered later in the story, I’m honestly grateful that the early plot doesn’t focus too much on this. A lot of the time, the transmigration acts in ways that completely erase the original character that’s being possessed. The author managed to dodge this pitfall by making the transmigrated experience all 2700 years of Venti’s past. This allows him to act as and believe in Venti’s ideals without the transmigrator being completely assimilated into Barbatos. This is the first time I’ve seen this happen, and is probably my favorite way of handling this situation. Furthermore, I was pleasantly surprised to see that this story ISN’T a power fantasy. Crazy right? A transmigrator without a leveling system with rpg mechanics. Instead of brute forcing his way through issues, Venti prioritizes watching his peers shine instead of himself. He allows others to take the spotlight while he stays in the back and orchestrates everything. (Unless shit hits the fan, then he’ll intervene) It was such a nice break from your typical power fantasy. Lastly, I’d like to talk about the translator. If you’re worried about this story being discontinued/having poor grammar, I’d like to quash those worries. The translator Wise has done a phenomenal job with this story. The grammar is near perfect, (any mistake can be easily ignored. Mostly it’s names that get misspelled) and the updates are incredibly frequent. There’s a set schedule alongside a patron and everything. Even if you can’t support Wise on patreon, just writing a review or sending a powerstone would benefit him/her tremendously. Ok. I’ve yapped enough. Best wishes to everyone who read this! Rating: 5/5 star. Perfect!