crying quotations

This is a great novel so far. The only complaints I have is the lack of commas and periods, and the incorrect use of quotations. Quotations are only meant for conversations or quotes. Not paragraphs.

It’s low bc there are no quotations marks

it's well written and an interesting concept. it's biggest downside is the author seems allergic to using quotations consistently. About half of the dialogue is just text with no quotations which gets pretty annoying.

would be a 5 star but the dialogue isnt consistent, some chapters its quotations and others its dashes. it would be easier reading dialogue with quotations since it clearly sets the beginning and the end of the dialogue instead of dashes

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