goku and frieza stare down

looking back at this fanfic after having more insight on dragon ball, I realized that even this peak author underestimated goku too. These days I've come to realize how bullshit goku actually is, and how if he actually went against the MC, he would adapt better and faster like he did with his fight with frieza. it was stated that friezas cells can adapt to the opponent, well goku adapted to that when they fought 😭

Did you know there’s another light novel on here that’s also about becoming goku? It’s called “In dragon ball as goku” basically similar except the guy knows what to do and prepare for future enemies by training like a nutcase while still giving his family attention. The man reached super saiyan 3 right after frieza saga.

This story is an insult to the character of Frieza. Basically the MC becomes Frieza and instantly starts to "fix" the main storyline as in he "pretends" to be evil so Gokua can become super Sayjan after which the story becomes even more cringe as the MC openly starts protecting Goku, stepping between him and Cooler and transforming into a 5th form like Cooler can. The story and the MC himself are just cringe.

Note: Goku will always be heavily surpressed. He will let the Z fighters do most of the fighting especially after Frieza Saga. But I'll let this 10 chapters cook first. Before deciding to continue. If there is good feedback then I'll continue.

While the concept is interesting, the story's logic is flawed. The idea that Frieza and Goku can't defeat Guy is implausible. Moreover, the intense reaction from everyone over a character who is actually weak in most of these worlds feels exaggerated. This opening signals that similar problems will likely continue.