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Yoi hanashi, omoshiroi kyarakutā. Watashi wa ikutsu ka no shō o yomimashita, soshite watashi wa sore o tsudzukeru tsumoridesu. Sutōrī ga dono yō ni shō ni tsuika sa re tsudzukeru ka o mite, sorekara hajimete, sukuriputo ga dorehodo yoi ka warui ka o handan dekimasu. Shikashi, hoka ni mo kyōmibukai ten ga arimasu

hello im already read your story and ist not bad at all but i want you to make more focusing on naruto character because he's the real mc and its interesting to see how naruto and fujin relationship instead fujin business with money or even always make hiruzen got a problem, its such a boring story. and also why not make another character from filler story became fujin disciple or friend such like sora from fire temple (hi no kuni) or menma from rice field village? and also yakumo kurama from kurama clan? and more charecter development for hoka because its such a pity he always got desperated on another desperated

There's a reason this is the most highly rated, reviewed, and viewed Naruto series on the site. This series expands on everything within Naruto and then some, by which I mean, it builds in, realistic and non-world breaking explanations, for plot holes and questions in the original series seamlessly, like what's beyond the sea, and how do souls really work. He also does justice to the original characters within the series. To the point where I think he might understand the characters better than any other fanfic writer ever. As an example, Hiruzen is done major justice within the series and his character is delved into and explained to such a degree that I think he's an objectively better version of himself from the original work. And it's not only the existing characters that are good. New characters such as the MC, his students, Hoka, ect... All have very fleshed out and well-defined characters, despite what some might say about the MC, even though many have admittedly less limelight than I would like. And on the MC specifically, I must say I find him to be the perfect Naruto world MC. He fits the theme of the world like no other fanfic mc does. He is both pragmatic and calm, as well as hard-working. And while some may say he lacks actual character, I find those people to be those that don't understand how to interpret a character that doesn't fall on the extreme side of any spectrum and is a much more subtle gray with a distinct personality. He is both a killer and a schemer with a silver tongue. But that is not all he is, he's someone who enjoys annoying and pranking people but not to the degree of ripping their own hair out, bar Shikaku. He is also someone who despite trying to not appear like its so, does care about his friends, a perfect example being when Hoka asked him to remove the caged Bird seal and he obliges, something that would actively put him against the entire Hyuga clan and could be dangerous for him. He is a menace to society especially his enemies, but he is not unkind as shown by how much he takes care of Naruto after they meet despite him not really having to. The only real complaint I can give you is the fact that the update schedule can be up and down sometimes but it's never awful.

I think this book will tell you if you like it or not by ch 205ish Spoilers: Author kills off uchia girl that MC is friends with in the itachi massacre. The biggest problem is that the author never really makes the mc feel any way about it. No anguish no clenched fist or inner conflict. From the other reviews ive read this doesnt seem to change all too much. Im all for smart and rationals mcs but when the MC isnt even intrested in his own life and relationships beyond training and murder what the fuck am i supposed to care about. The MC is a sociopath that ruins the novel its a good novel otherwise For all those glazers who want to say “wtf was he supposed to do he too weak” HES SUPPOSED TO CRY OR SCREAM OR GRIEVE NOT GO ”DAMN SHES GONNA DIE LOL” stop saying he was powerless we fucking know hes powerless but hes also fucking emotionless. Literally right after Hoka is heading torwards his own end against itachi and his only thought is damn senseis losing another student. He does stop this but the guy is a sociopath. It is fine to be level headed even a bit cold in the shinobi world but the guy just doesnt care and neither should you. Expandning on that anyone who says its fine to be this cold cause death is common you have never seen the original naruto