brockton s celestial forge by lordroustabout

It is wordy for the sake of words. The first 6 chapters could be shortened to 2-3 chapters. I can do it in a few sentences. MC was reincarnated as Galactus in DC. He ate, Death wagged her finger, the end. If you somehow do enjoy the unnecessarily long nature of this writing style you'll probably also enjoy Brockton's Celestial Forge.

It is a good celestial forge fanfic but it is way too american for my taste. First of all mc is weak. In 100 chapter all his perks are mostly useless as in not in the whole discipline of science from some interstellar civilization. He is repeatedly beaten by powerful entity for no reason. In 99 chaper he is basically becomes almost cripple with is nerfed system. Logic holes are mc is kidnapped by dormamu but kamataj doesn't react at all. All his plans fail at bad time or some new threat comes at bad time without foreshadowing. People die fast like got. I say author you should reat brockton bay celestial forge.

Normally, I can't stand reading an OC insert, but the way the game system delivers little hints makes it far more bearable. In that, it reminds me of Lord Roustabout's Brockton's Celestial Forge. While the Mc is played as dense for humor, they do tend to at least realize in hindsight the implications of their interactions quickly enough, making it easily bearable. The gamer system had also been reduced to only the most approachable aspects it is known for. As of chapter 5, I've been enjoying what content there is and genuinely look forward to updates.

the celestial forge is my favorit fanfiction idea and this is well written i really hopes this continuis either with a magical route or the technological one