cirilla riannon

I'm usually not a fan of world hopping since most authors overreach with taking hundreds of chapters. I love that you kept it short and mostly focus on SoL. It's a breathe of fresh air compared to the shounenfication of almost every fanfics here. Bonus point is Cirilla is one of my favorite waifus.

Es una novela con mucho potencial a explorar 🧐👌🏻 tiene una buena traducción y gramática de calidad, el desarrollo del MC en ganar poder es medianamente lento pero comprensible ya que todavía no tiene ni dos dígitos de edad, espero que haya un salto de tiempo en su crecimiento y en su interacción con Cirilla ya que la actitud de la mocosa es bastante exasperante, espero que el autor aparte de desarrollar el mundo actual también tome en cuenta en explorar las brechas espaciales hacia otros mundos tomando en cuenta que Ciri también puede ir a otros mundos 😉 a todo esto recomiendo la novela 🤙🏻

That is my first time writing anything on this site and my first review. I actually doubt I will find another story, that can inspire me to write my thoughts about it. All in all, it is excellent work with a good language and thought process. The story is consistent, characters are well explained and have proper logic to their behavior. Even original ones are actually quite entertaining. If there is a reason why in character development I put four is mainly because I still vividly remember all witcher books and like the series. Cirilla is a controversial and complex character. Actually, the whole witcher world and storyline belongs to her, not Geralt if one looked at it through the influence she had on the world and forces involved. And because of that actually trying to portray her in fanfic work is really arduous job. Actually, author did pretty well here overly, so consider me being grumpy. And I have a little point that author may (or may not and had it in plans) forgot about Ciri. Her visions of Chaos. They are really vital in the whole development of the story and it will be very good thing to show them and furthermore to let MC enter her trance with her, like Triss did. Thank you for your good work. If this post contain some of your ideas and spoiler for them, feel free to delete it.

So, overall this is a very good story. There are several things however that have had me annoyed, and diminish my desire to read it. Let's go over it The characters are interesting, no doubt, the dark souls ones especially. However when we get to the HP world we get a bit more finicky with this. Cirilla acts out of character quite often, these moments usually result in her being incredibly greedy and selfish. She demands to be taught his every ability and betrays his trust in order to achieve this goal, however when she gets abilities for the elder blood she doesnt hesitate to keep them to herself or waiting till she masters the abilities before letting him know of them. The length of time in separate dimensions is actually somewhat annoying sometimes. We barely spent any time in the witcher before we get thrown into the Absolver world. The absolver arc isn't too long, around the length of the witcher arc however I found it very boring, mostly due to the very little I know of the world. The end of the absolver arc was definately more enjoyable because we finally see him using the abilities he had apparently learned but never used before. The dark souls arc was too long. It dragged on for far longer than was needed, and though it was well written with enjoyable characters it definately became stale. Admittedly I enjoyed the beginning of the Dark souls arc very little, the middle and end was more enjoyable but I was counting chapters till he moved worlds. The HP world was one I was really looking forward to. The vampires were an interesting addition, adding a little more to the somewhat empty HP world that I enjoyed greatly. His growing relationship with Nerissa is still interesting to read. However, the arc was very much held back and somewhat ruined due to some factors. The first, Ciri acting like a spoilt idiotic brat, she betrayed Reimas trust without a second thought out of personal greed, and Reima barely even gave her a reprimand. She continued to act as if she was his boss, and is if he owed her something when in truth she owed Reima a great deal. The second was his being almost thrust into a mentorship position for so many people, it put him into a position where we were often reading about the development of characters we just meant and really didn't have much interest in. His relationship with Ciri felt somewhat forced and rushed. And finally just how flustered he became at the slightest questioning from dumbledore felt incredibly forced to me. The arc would have been infinitely better if he participated in the Tournament, unfortunately Ciri ruined that and we were pretty much left as the side characters. Now back to the witcher arc, after like 400 chapters of other dimensions we finally return. Admittedly not much to say about this arc yet, its interesting but not much else can be said. The leadership role he has been thrust in was annoying, but he thankfully found a work around of that. Over all a very good story with some things I dislike, but when is there not? One of the worst things in this story however is just how he lets so many people walk all over him, mostly women. He doesnt want a religion about him, but instead of really putting a stop to it he half heartedly complains about it without actually doing anything. Unfortunately this seems to be a common theme with Reima.

HELLO, PLEASE READ THIS IF YOU WISH TO AVOID RIPPING YOUR HAIR OUT IN FRUSTRATION AS THIS STORY SLOWLY TURNS FROM ONE OF YOUR FAVOURITES INTO UTTER SHITE. It may start out strong, but it gets progressively worse as soon as the mc gets to the Harry Potter universe WARNING: this is not a Witcher story - overall, the witcher world has a relatively minor presence and the emphasis is on characters from a variety of different, yet incompatible worlds being brought to it, which makes power levels vary in unpredictable and painful manners and turns the plot slowly more and more retarded as a godlike mc struggles against mortals and their plots due to his own passive, cuckold nature, lack of foresight and weakness of mind and character. Regardless, here we fucking go... This story started out so well, yet it turned out to be an utter disappointment in the later stages. The mc starts out in the witcher world, before leaving it to briefly travel to the absolver universe, before choosing to got to dark souls... and staying there for a few hundred chapters. Regardless of the extremely long time spent in dark souls, and the fact that the mc spends his time in somewhat typical dark souls fashion fighting through hordes of enemies and a boss every chapter for roughly 300 chapters, the interactions between characters are beyond excellent and keep the otherwise bland plot interesting. However, it all goes to shit as soon as the mc leaves dark souls to travel to a random world, which turns out to be Harry Potter, where - plot twist! - he finds Cirilla, who's accidentally murdered Sirius Black and ****ed up the timeline - sounds interesting? Well it isn't. The story begins to unravel completely from here on out. The mc becomes a simp for Ciri, giving her anything she wants for free whenever she demands it of him, while guilt tripping her into staying with him while he "fixes" everything. He also has a three way with Fleur and Ciri, before they ditch her to go to their universe again, while leaving her a conspicuously easy way to contact them. She doesn't, and they don't give a ****. You may say "every story has its weak points" and keep reading in the hopes of it getting back on track - don't. When they return to the witcher, they **** up a Nilfgaardian fleet and get ready to face the Wild Hunt by summoning everyone Reima has befriended and saving them from their slowly imploding worlds, namely Absolver and Dark Souls. They win, but the Wild Hunt isn't completely eradicated, then the heroes found a city. MC travels to Undertale, for some fucking reason, getting the monsters from that world to join him after saving them, before saving some people from Harry Potter - apparently he caused the apocalypse in that world as the muggle nuked themselves and the magical in the hopes of killing them all (somehow? The muggle nuked THEMSELVES to EXTINCTION to kill the wizards among them... What. The. Fuck?) Anyway, turns out the MC got cucked by Bill Weasley, who's Fleur's new beau. For some reason. And the mc's like "oh, that's cool", before he fucks off elsewhere. Some more contrived retarded plot where the mc, who by now has God-level powers, struggles against totally inadequate threats before sometimes letting them be, before another character from Dark Souls, who's been vying for the mc's attention and love for this whole time while being blatantly and consciously ignored in favor of this bratty, bitch, gold digging characterisation of Ciri, suddenly does a 180, becomes a psycho stalker, drugs her and rapes her via love potions so that Ciri would help her get with the mc. Sounds ****ed up? It gets worse! When the mc discovers the whole plot and Ciri is freed forom the potion's control, she goes "oh, that was cool" and the mc, who just got cucked a second time with a different woman, who's also clearly fine with cheating on him, also goes "oh, that was cool". Then the guilty party suffers literally no punishment, and in fact gets her way by becoming Ciri's *** slave, as she keeps cheating on the mc with her former rapist, while the mc is happily getting cucked. I don't know what happens after that because by now my brain's almost melted and pouring out of my fucking ears and I've given up on this dumpster fire of a story. This is a perfect example of a story starting out strong and slowly going to shit as the author tries to mil it for all it's worth. I really regret ever voting in its favour, because it makes you get invested by playing the characters against each other perfectly, before ruining it all as the author doesn't give a ****. Honestly, one of the worst reads on this site for anyone who doesn't enjoy getting cucked and acting like a simp, which I strongly believe is part of the author's everyday interests. Read at your own peril. Good luck