She pampered the villain after the book
Everyone in Guangyue City knew that the eldest daughter of the Yun family, Yun Ran, had a bodyguard who accompanied her since she was young. She could not be chased away, and she was also ridiculed by others because of this.
She had once shouted at him angrily,"Can you not follow me?!" So annoying!"
He did not react.
However, not long after, Missy became the bodyguard's follower.
"Ember, if you don't let me follow you, I won't like you anymore," she joked.
The girl's smile was bright and cunning, like a little fox.
The next second, she was pressed into his arms and kissed.
The man's back was slightly bent. His posture was humble and pious, and his eyes were filled with aggression and possessiveness. His voice was hoarse and low.
"Ranran, don't joke with me like this."
He could tolerate her never looking back.
But he couldn't stand her leaving his sight.
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The world is turbid, day and night are the same sin, sin and love are the same song.
He had lived half his life in darkness, drowning in hatred, and she was his only light.
[Cool, rich, beautiful, and arrogant sister X, two-faced, tolerant, and paranoid bodyguard, two strong and two clean, sweet pets 1v1, mutual redemption]
only 2 chapters but looks promising a few tips tho ensure you a writing in character for internal monologues batman would think in a similar fashion to how he talks. draw things out a bit describe the surroundings doesn't have to be complex eg: "crawling out of the vent Ben as grey matter took in the libraries interior. dozens of book shelves arranged neatly filled the space leaving a small area towards the front of the room where the librarians desk sits. situated closely to the main entrance." notice how i set the scene without being too specific just described a standard library and the reader fills in the Blanks you only need to describe things like layouts or objects in the environment if they are important to the story like the layout of a secret lab or the light of a lamp post shape the scene how you need and let the reader fill in the blanks