greyjoy family

I really like your fanfic, I’ve actually reread it a few times. But the recent chapters, like 74 or 75, where the story is told from Daenerys's POV—I didn't really like how she talks about Euron Greyjoy. Like, her thinking he’ll give her the Seven Kingdoms and Blackfyre is one thing, that makes sense. But Greyjoy? Seriously? In the show, Daenerys actually loved or at least had some real feelings for the men she slept with. But here, you're writing this about Euron Greyjoy, who is a complete psychopath and a rapist.

Worst fantic I've read. I lack words to describe how disappointing it is. I've never seen Mc more satic and sociopathic than this, a mix of Cersei, Tywin and Euron Greyjoy.

I wanted to like this story, and I did for a while. But it fell into calling the Wardens and Lord Paramounts, Dukes. Calling Greyjoy's Kings. Picking at things that shouldn't matter and over looking things that do.

No offence to the translator, but the original author is trash. From chapter 200~ the story HUGELY drops in quality. The mc lets a few enemies go(euron greyjoy), and when he is later attacked by said enemies and nearly dies, he acts all surprised.

The story is great, good character and world building. The only hang ups for me would be the pace of the story. more than 40 chapters and it's still during the greyjoy rebellion. It's a very slice of life story but I just want more story development or something.