Wife's Secret: A Billionaire in My House
The bride had run away and she was brought in to impersonate her, scoring a handsome husband for free. Her husband was rich, domineering, and had a great physique. Young and vigorous with plenty of strength! The boss wants to take advantage of her? Acquisition! Someone is bullying her? Blacklist! A car hit her? Smash it! "Honey, you're too violent." "I can't help it, I can't stand seeing others bully you." She was touched, thinking that happiness had arrived and that she could become Mrs. Ryan for real. Until one day, he packed her luggage for her. "Leave, she's back now." She hid her pregnancy diagnosis and left in style… Five years later, she returned home with her twins. All of a sudden one day, "Mommy, some scammer dared to impersonate our dad, we beat him up! We should be rewarded, right?" "Beat someone up? And still want a reward?" Who did these two little devils learn this violence from? Wait a minute? Their dad?... Sofia rushed to check, and who was locked in the restroom if not Mr. Ryan Gregory! Ryan Gregory roared, "How do you educate the kids!" Sofia raised an eyebrow, "I can’t help it, it's hereditary!"
Zhao Kuankuan · General
The good points are your updating, and your willingness to accept criticism author. Sadly in my opinion this story need some serious work, the butler for instance should be changed out to the House Elf Dobby, since Dobby works for the Malfoy family till the second book/movie. I'd suggest reading the novels are writing your character with that knowledge. Also try to limit the "young master" talk, it comes off as translation fic. Plus you'll want more flow in your writing, right now it appears wooden, very A.I written.