Spirit Hall Rising: Tang San Must Die
At the start, he was an ordinary Spirit Hall member, originally wanting to live a full year, completing the 365 days of consecutive lots, obtaining the ultimate reward, but in the end Ghost Douluo saw through his genius identity.
Facing Bibi Dong, Tian Ming:
Becoming a revered elder, the number one person below Bibi Dong, Tian Ming led Spirit Hall to first destroy Tang Hao and then Tang San to eliminate the greatest hidden danger, then flatten the upper three sects, the lower four sects, eliminate the narrow-mindedness of the sects, and finally subdue the two great empires, unifying the Spirit Master world!
Then, with the strength of the entire continent, everyone would head straight for the sea of stars!
"We don't want to become gods! And he must not be interfered with by the gods! We were born free, who dares to be high and mighty! The Divine Realm must die! Long live Douluo Star! Long live freedom!"
As for Xiao Wu, Rongrong, Zhu Qing, Hu Liena, Bai Chenxiang, Dugu Yan, Huo Wu, Shui Bing-Er……
"Ha, women only affect the speed at which I release my soul skill! All of you!"
Level 4 is enough.
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The good points are your updating, and your willingness to accept criticism author. Sadly in my opinion this story need some serious work, the butler for instance should be changed out to the House Elf Dobby, since Dobby works for the Malfoy family till the second book/movie. I'd suggest reading the novels are writing your character with that knowledge. Also try to limit the "young master" talk, it comes off as translation fic. Plus you'll want more flow in your writing, right now it appears wooden, very A.I written.