slendytubbies tinky winky

Kinda great plot. Tho mc kinda dumb or shoukd i say the author. Pacing kinda winky. A good read but need to burn some brain cells specially in the latter chs.

Me encanto la historia amo los epílogos y me hubiera gustado más... Que paso con luna??? Que más se desarrolló?? Y Dobby y winky??? Y Fleur??? Que paso con Hagrid??? Y los gemelos??? Quiero saber más!!!!!!!!!!!

keep up the good work, let there be development, etc. No need to rush. But since this is a harem, we are waiting for the corresponding chapters))) Oh and also since this is a cartoon in an ordinary world, I suggest crossovers with ordinary worlds from Nickelodeon such as iCarly, Big Time Rush (you wrote about the songs yourself, then there is an opportunity with group songs), and also if Lincoln goes into acting, I suggest a crossover with the cartoon series Victoria the Victorious.

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Pretty bad translation quality, I've read it's supposed to get better but when it's still this bad at 300+ chapters, it drags down the series as a whole. To give an example, this is a somewhat ***** novel with s*x and excessive violence and whatnot, yet the translator decided to use childish words like "winky" and "tummy", it really ruins the mood to say the least. A lot of other outstanding mistakes as well, but my favorite is "blow-mindingly"...How do you get that wrong? Story as a whole is nothing new, same typical xianxia sort of shtick, which may be why I'm dropping the novel at around 300 chapters as it feels like a chore to read it at this point.