tanjiro x zenitsu

Very good fanfiction. The only thing I don't understand is, why is he so weak? I mean he is supposed to have a really strong body and is two years older than tanjiro, so then why are zenitsu, inosuke and tanjiro as strong as him. There is also the fact, that he still didn't use sun breathing or isn't he aware of how to use it? After all even if he didn't Tanjiro would've talked about it.

No. Read two chapters, first chapter is total ****, grammar is horrible, story doesn’t make much sense, not much excitement. Second chapter, read half of it, “Fuck this **** I’m not reading this boring crap anymore!” My face throughout this entire time reading this novel I see like Tanjiro looking at Zenitsu like he is a thing or something... all in all? Quite bad. Still gotta commend the author for having the courage to write a novel tho right?

Haven't been any real reviews apart from EXP. The story has a better start than the original, honestly, I didn't care much for the backstory that Zenitsu was betrayed by a girl and sought after by debt collectors. It didn't make much sense when it came to his character, instead of fawning over every girl he met, he should have been distrustful. The story has good direction so far, its a more realistic take on Zenitsu's character. The writing and grammar is decent and I do hope later on in the story that it will divulge from the original plot and give Zenitsu room to grow and do his own adventures rather than following the original plot.

this crossover story between tanjiro and venom is good, but this chapter are finishing so fast,

please tell me she doesn't sleep around with multiple men and only tanjiro in this book author-San answer me please I need to know before I read and if she only sleeps with tanjiro good job my brother we rockin with you