His Beloved Treasure
At twenty, she had a child in secret.
At twenty-two, she was discreetly married into a wealthy family.
Qin Mu lost her mother at the age of seven and was sent abroad by her unscrupulous father when she was only eight. Little did she expect her future to be so bright, she decided to climb up on Mu General's shoulders with great strides.
Mu Yichen went from being Rongcheng's top heartthrob to its youngest tycoon—arrogant and wise, unfathomable, yet he somehow fell into the hands of a little lass.
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About marriage.
"Mu Yichen, we are just—friends!"
"That can't be the reason you reject me!"
Qin Mu was scared stiff, as Mu General rudely carried her off to the marriage registration office, to sign, to stamp, to get the certificate!
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Hidden marriage for too long.
"If you say our daughter is adopted from the orphanage, I won't argue with you, but when will you make me public?" In broad daylight, Mu General pinned Mrs. Mu against the corner wall, threatening her with a devilish charm.
"Depends on your performance!" Mrs. Mu smirked, and the next moment, she counterattacked Mu General.
"Quick, cover your eyes!" Mu Baby, who had been ignored on the side, immediately covered her eyes.
Gentle Breeze Loving the Drifting Snow · Urban
Story is ok. It could be better if the author let the MC be his own person with his own thoughts and feelings and goals. Instead, hes just a baby sitter for hiccup and astrid and it gets annoying. Hes always following and sticking up for hiccup, for no reason other than plot and it comes off as forced. The author states that theyre friends, but their interactions state otherwise. Not to mention the author decides to have the MC lose his leg….for no reason whatsoever. Does the author want the MC to be hiccup or something? Like at that point why even make an OC. The MC shoulda just been hiccup. (Id just like to know the reasoning) he could have lost an eye, an arm, an ear, a hand….ANYTHING. Yet the author wanted to have him lose a leg and not be able to walk…i mean whatever.