outlander murtagh

This book is absolutely wonderful. Beautiful character creation and story. I can’t wait to read more. I love Outlander, so this is lovely. How did you come up with the characters of Lanie and Ned? Do you see elements of yourself in Lanie?

can you write The inheritance cycle fanfiction if you do I will give you my stones and yeah I'll give you full ratings on every book you ever create I just there aren't enough The inheritance cycle FanFictions with with a male OC as a little brother to eragon and Murtagh and lives with eragon so yeah there's never enough of those books and there's so many times where I've asked so many other people to write these books but they never do it but it's up to you if you want to write it

"The Sage of Einar" is an exciting story similar to Diana Gabaldon's "Outlander", with a touch of Nordic and Viking history. Personally, I'm a sucker for stories with vikings in them. I could count the number of Eric, son of Eric's I have read about in dozens of novels. So, this one definitely caught my eyes. Alas, because I hold so much expectations for this, I too will give an appropriate review. Points to work on: -Grammar: It's definitely better than most of the webnovels I've read, but I know you can do better with your proofreading. Make it more readable, and I might just be an avid fan. -Dialogue: Now this is a tough issue. Frankly, the characters don't seem real, especially when you read through their dialogues. I may not be privy to it, but is there a modern country where a father calls his daughter, "Daughter"? This is one of the biggest issues I've seen, and it's important to improve on this because having a culture-rich story like this requires believable character interactions. If the conversations are as dry and constructed as the ones I have seen, then more should really be done about it. Points I really liked: -Story: The plot is fast-paced and interesting. I would have been easily sucked into it if there were less problems with the grammar and dialogue. -Feelings: I loved how their interactions were human-like (sadly, their dialogue was weirdly off...). Max was crazy scared when he was looking for his daughter. The daughter was hinted to be jealous about his father treating Ana well (and not her deceased mother!). It's cute, and these little things matter to me as a reader. -Representation: Greece, Japanese, Nordic, American(?). I loved the slight references to many nations and cultures. Andddd that's about it! I might have been carried away too much, but there's my honest review. This novel holds great promise, and appeals to a certain target market (me), but sadly still suffers from general writing. Author, improve more on the technicalities, and I might turn out to be a fan. :D

Translation quality; Being honest it’s good translation and I don’t find much mistakes in my reads besides some few mistakes Stability of updates; We receive one - two chapter updates per day which is great compared to other authors who update weekly Story development; The story development is straightforward where the Mc want to get more powerful and rule a great kingdom and live a lecherous life while doing so Character design; This is so disappointing while the Mc has a background that is explained and has potential when he starts to get more women he becomes a character who I hate the most:someone who plays with women for his sexual desires and a gain in power, plus with his ability it completely makes a women loyal to after sex.Oh wait, never mind, I should be saying after he rapes them because I have to say only 1-3 are consensual while the other is because they give them him their bodies after he helps them with their situation and while this goes on and on and on, some girls that were introduced are forever gotten when he receives more power and beautiful women whom, like all the rest, are barley given any description of their thoughts because while the author describes them (looks flirtatious, looks calm, has a proud aura) that’s it, that’s all you will ever get and every read after the Mc turns into loyal sex dolls who keep there intelligence but agree with him 100% and always get horny when they see him World development; Although there is some most of it is still hidden and the Mc is clueless about it honestly I’m 1600 chapters in and more disappointed than where I started Another issue besides my problem with his harem would be the authors battles in the story. Garbage,absolutely garbage.Examples of his fights [Enemy slashed out with great power and knocked Zhou Fu back 4 feet, Zhou Fu burst out with even more power and knocks enemy back 10 feet] And in case you are wondering this **** is said like 4 more times and then the battle ends anti climatically and in the outlander academy arc this last for 20 chapter currently and it’s still fucking going and I swear if this doesn’t stop by 190 I’m dropping this book wait no I’m probably just going to strait out drop it and the author should be thankful I gave him an honest rating instead of strait out 1 Star 👎👎👎