black af history the un whitewashed story of america

I really like the mc and his style. but this ff feels like a history of America. I don’t want to read history of you/ America on Marvel fanfic. I read 17 chapters and it didn’t progress anywhere close to marvel story.

I think this story would have worked better if the author didn't try to set it in America. It might work for readers in different countries, but as an American, it lacks. America has a history with armed robbery since the 1700s. Modern robbery would not be treated this way in America.

The MC is a mixed bag character. Every now and then the mc has to use the word "nigga" and talk like a stereotypical black as if to convince the audience, or at least remind them, that the mc is indeed a black protagonist and does so to keep his imaginary black card. Apart from these small interludes, he's like Captain America and Punisher combined and with the wisdom of Solomon. The story is ok at best.

way out of character can like captain america have problem begin order around by black person natasha have dirty thought about frog tounge

The iron trial of a black hole is the best chec in history of a black man and his wife is the first to die 6and in a day 88of the next 8to is not one that will pass