The First Brave Man
One day, you will be appreciated by God for your bravery. He said that as long as you were fearless, you could continue to become stronger.
Because of this, you ran to a cemetery in the middle of the night. That night, firecrackers rang out and fireworks shot in all directions!
" You have unspeakable pain in your heart, but in order to become a hero, you run to a group of bandits and shout," Let go of that man!"
When you entered the hall of marriage, you still maintained your original heart and thought that the brave were invincible. So, you pointed your middle finger at the woman in front of you…
Then, a series of heart-wrenching wails and the crisp sound of a broken hand came from inside…
Was it the loss of morality or the distortion of humanity behind this? Or…This packet of spicy sticks had already passed its shelf life?
Standing on the peak of the mountain, carrying the black pot on your back, you sighed silently, then raised your head and puffed out your chest, letting out a long roar towards the sky.
"Invincible Brave!"
ps：
This was the story of a steady and easy-going person gradually becoming a brave and boorish man.
too reckless
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The story setting looks good. Grammar is good. Premise is good. Pacing is Good. Only thing not good is the romatic pairing. Author made Lorelei x Shirou TT. And for that reason, I am dropping this fic because I am Shirou x Rin