the alternatives

First stop using ok use alternatives such as (all right, fine, alright uh-huh and right) Next is capitalization it's very bad try to capitalize names,places or the first words of each sentence or whatever you call it Lastly dont add to much anime to the original world **. search for google for some good words alternatives so it does not get repetetive

Where do you read the raw is it faloo or another site cause I can't find any alternatives except Faloo ******************************************************************************************************************************

There is zero reason for this to be as popular as it is. Plot is overdone and there are many better alternatives. Theres not enough chapters for any real development yet people are going crazy over nothing

This story could have provided a bit more on costs, alternatives, and how this study was performed. painIt’s too bad those comments don’t appear until the end.

Interesting and enjoyable. I was thinking how the plot will develop, I'll not say that its an excellent novel because there are far better alternatives. I'll still say, it worth's the time of reading.