tlc sweepstakes

the story is interesting, kind of suspense and thrilling. The story focus on family, i like more the character of the brother of the male lead. Needs more TLC from the male and female lead..

A very entertaining read, that will have the reader laughing out loud and turning those pages. The grammar could use some tlc but very enjoyable despite the errors, all the best!

Interesting take on alchemy compared to other CN stuff. It needs some TLC in the editing department. All in all, I'm intrigued with the story so far even with inconsistencies.

Needs serious tlc as the grammar is everywhere. Lower cases when should be upper case and vice versa among the most glaring problems. Other then that if one can get past that it is an enjoyable read

Short and sweet. Loved all the characters but the romance seemed rushed between FL and ML. Want more TLC btw them. And it would have been ok if some side xters died too😘