ikura de yoshimura ka

Author, you need to be more consistent in updating this fanfic.................................................................................................................

1. The main character's knowledge is inconsistent, sometimes he knows everything but sometimes he doesn't know something he should know. 2. Calling other characters by their full names makes the language feel very stiff, for example: "Touka" becomes "Kirishima Touka." 3. Adding something unnecessary, for example: secret laboratory room in ward 24, black-skinned eyeless ghouls, ancient ghouls who can't use kagune. 4. Calling the "One-eyed Owl" "Eto Yoshimura" is important to note that Eto Yoshimura's identity or name is only known to the Aogiri Tree's top brass like Tatara.

The flow was actually good. Two different characters; Isang matured at isang menor de edad. It can also be happen in real life. Galingan mo lang Dear. Medidate ka lang kapag down ka sa pagsulat 👍 🤗😘

Muy buena historia de amor incondicional me gusta especialmente su amor de hija y ahora de madre excelente pero abc los capítulos son muy cortos y a ka espera de mas.

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