avengers wanda

The author should value the story relationships more. I mean, it's like gojo doesn't have any connection to this world. Or with the avengers and really the writer wanda x gojo should do sorcerer and witch wouldn't it be awesome?

AUTHOR: THIS IS MY IDEA,.. BUT I WOULD HAVE DONE IT DIFFERENTLY..WANDA AND DOCTOR STRANGE GET REINCARNATED IN FAIRY TAIL after their battle. They are brother and sister, OR Wanda is Lucy's twin, AND MAY BE TONY STARK-LOKI-BLACKWIDOW FROM MARVEL REINCARNATED IN FAIRY TAIL, DOCTOR STRANGE BRING THEM TOGETHER. Their novel was strange, get reincarnated into Harry Potter....AUTHOR, this is gold. The plot has potential..OR MC WITH DOCTOR STRANGE TEMPLATE..thank you

The novel is good but I have some things to say: to start at this point in the story Peter should be immune to bullets, at least to low-caliber ones, which sometimes lengthens the fights unnecessarily and unrealistically within the same universe, some avengers such as thor or hulk were also left out, they appear but so far they have not fought as avengers, Pietro and Wanda, Doctor Strange, things are happening too fast, we are about to enter the spider -verse and Peter is still in school, and considering the timeline and that it all starts in 2010, it shouldn't happen, and even though Peter can alter the timeline due to his intervention, it seems to me that the author is aware of it. past.

This is yet again, a case of interesting concept with bad execution. The whole new body thing happens at chapter 34, which is a while. The main love interest is wanda, but the story is harem. But the way the author introduced the second lover of the MC, Silk, is by using pheromones to basically make him cheat on wanda. Which is then glossed over because of fucking course it is. Then there’s the conflict with the avengers and the X-men, which honestly wouldn’t have been that bad had the author not writing it in a way that hammers ‘hiding true abilities’ into the story. How, you may ask? By making it look like the mc has no powers to the public, painting it as the avengers and X-men attacking the powerless saviour of the country. The problem? Now what happens when inevitably the MC has their powers exposed to the public? He brainwashes them with telepathy to cover up the lie? He continues to hide them from the public? And the reason? To prop wanda up as the hero. Not a problem in of itself if its done right, which it wasnt here. Then there’s the prolonged conflict with thanos, with thanos finding out about him and escaping so the mc can go around and get power ups. Ugh. Honestly the story isnt bad but i wont be finishing it. And that says a lot considering the slop i’m willing to read through.

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